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Revision as of 22:01, 7 July 2005 by Frater C.U.G. (talk | contribs) (more probs)
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This page desperately needs references! Where did we get all this info??? Fr. Ash 09:58, 7 Jul 2005 (CDT)

Some other problems
  • Several statements that reek of opinion (candy version of Thelema for example)
  • Several comments about Motta reflect the current OTO views such as he did not have the authority to start an Brazilian OTO. We should at least note that he believed he did. (At least that was the impression I got reading some of the trial transcripts on the web) or simply state he started “a OTO with no reference to legitimacy of said order.
  • Looks like the person who posted this was not a native English speaker, so there are a few translation errors to be fixed. NOTE: This is not a "big problem" so non-native speakers should still feel free to contribute.

Not sure what to do about the references. Some of it seems to come from the various trial transcripts on the web, but most of them are located on web sites that are most definitely biased in their viewpoints so I would be cautious in assuming they haven’t been “edited” a bit. Frater C.U.G. 17:01, 7 Jul 2005 (CDT)